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Criticism...

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You always yell at me...
You always tell me things...
You always hurt me...
You always glare at me...
You always blame me...

What did I do...?
What did I do that was so wrong?
What did I do to make you mad?
What did I do?

I always try to please you
I always try to help you
I always try to make you happy!
I do good in school
I get rewards for what I do
I try to get involve with other things
Isn't that what you wanted?

Didn't I make you proud?
Doesn't what I do make you happy?
Why do you hate me!?
I didn't do anything wrong!

What did I say that was bad?!
You start a conversation with me
I tell you what I think
You begin yelling at me in anger
you say something and I comment
You begin threatening me to no end!
You call for me and I nod to you about to come to you
But you then insulting me.

What did I do?! I didn't do anything wrong!

Are you never happy with me?
We used to be happy...
What happened to you?
Nothing happened to me, I never changed.
You're the one who changed.
I want to hug you again, kiss your cheek
But you keep hurting me so many times!
Emotionally and physically...
What did i do...?

I make something for you
You say it looks horrible.
I take a break for something
You call me a lazy sloth...
I try to make you proud
You call me a worthless daughter...
Why do you always criticize everything about me?!?!

I didn't do anything but you...
You keep criticizing what I do!
I do something good
You turn it into something bad
I say something
You make into something horrible
You turn my day happy
Into something horrible and heartbreaking...

Why do you do this to me...

Just leave me alone now...
Quit saying things to hurt me
Quit criticizing me everyday!
"Do this", "Do that", "Nothing but a worthless daughter"
I didn't do anything...

I hate how you criticize me...
I don't know you anymore...
And you don't know who I am anymore...
My relationship with my mother... It sucks... that's all I have to say... things aren't just the same anymore... And I blame her...

She just yells at me now, and the last time I ever hear her say "I love you" was a year ago... I don't hear that anymore... I don't know who she is anymore...
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